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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories, and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

#traffic #companies #factories #employees #countryside
Quite often large companies located in
city
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 centre in sky-scrapers or big factories buildings and
this
 cause traffic and housing problems. Some
people
 propose as a solution to move
such
 organizations to the countryside. Personally, I agree that
such
step
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 could solve some issues but potentially
also
 could cause some other so let’s look at
this
 a little bit closer.
Firstly
, traffic issues sourced from
disproportion
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the disproportion
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 of
transport
 communications throughput and amount of
people
 travelling to/from
work
 in certain hours. So relocating workplaces to the countryside
also
 will require
well-organised
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 transportation system to prevent traffic in that area. The big difference in constructing modern
transport
 solution in
city
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the city
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 centre and a suburbs is that there is much more space at
new
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the new
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 place and no limitations with historical buildings and existing communications.
Therefore
transport
 question may be solved
this
 way.
Secondly
, housing
question
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tightly
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 connected with
people
's travels during the workday. During the day and after
work
people
 usually experience needs in shops, cafes, cinemas and other cultural/entertainment places which usually located in
city
-centre and sometimes unique. In
this
case
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 it looks like not completely possible
separate
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central
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the central
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 area of a
city
 from living areas and working places.
Thus
 to solve crowding issues in
city
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the city
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 it’s required not only move large companies outside the
city
 but
also
 create well-
organazed
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organized
transport
 system to allow
people
 travel fast and easy from home to
work
 and entertainment places.
Summarising
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, for some cases relocating big organizations for sure will help to rebalance the load and keep central historical areas preserved. Still, if it’s possible to enhance existing
transport
 communication
then
 it should be considered as an option while nowadays new opportunities like remote
work
 became available.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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