You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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The essay is about some of the electrical goods which I would like to buy at a shop in a nearby town.Here I will check with the owner of the store about the product's availability and how long will it take to deliver. Dear sir/Madam,
Firstly
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, I would like to purchase an iPhone 13 pro max with 128 GB storage, a 12 MP front camera, one year warranty, 6.7-inch display. Due to covid ,restrictions I am unable to travel.So ,please try to deliver the product when it is present.
However
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,could please provide the availability of the mobile which I am asking about. If the item is present right now in store, kindly deliver it to the following address Challera,Sector 3 ,Noida,UP,201303.If the product is unobtainable is any chances to order and how long will it take to deliver. Send me the prices list of the iPhone having the same features with a different colour. Thanks in advance. Regards, Teja
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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