You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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The essay is about some of the electrical goods which I would like to buy at a shop in a nearby town.Here I will check with the owner of the store about the product's availability and how long will it take to deliver. Dear sir/Madam,

Firstly

, I would like to purchase an iPhone 13 pro max with 128 GB storage, a 12 MP front camera, one year warranty, 6.7-inch display. Due to covid ,restrictions I am unable to travel.So ,please try to deliver the product when it is present.

However

,could please provide the availability of the mobile which I am asking about. If the item is present right now in store, kindly deliver it to the following address Challera,Sector 3 ,Noida,UP,201303.If the product is unobtainable is any chances to order and how long will it take to deliver. Send me the prices list of the iPhone having the same features with a different colour. Thanks in advance. Regards, Teja

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The Greeting

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Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

The Greeting

in some countries, owning a house rather than renting one is very improtant fro people. why might this be the case? do you think this is positive or negative situation?

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.