Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that it is essential for pupils to learn about foods and the ways that they are made in scientific approach, whilst there are others who think that the

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time should be spent on the more significant lessons. Whereas there are some benefits to the opinion of the

second

group, I strongly believe that the idea of the

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crowd is more reasonable. Both views will be addressed in

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essay. On one side of the

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there are

people

who argue that the merits of gaining knowledge about meals and cooking considerably outweigh the drawbacks. The main reason for believing

this

is that

this

matter is associated with the health of a society.

In other words

, if students learn about

this

issue, they will undoubtedly be able to change

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society's eating habits.

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obesity could be one of the most significant results of

this

idea. To be more precise,

this

is a fact that the rate of obesity between the

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youngsters

is obviously higher than the others,

therefore

, teaching them some

food

principles and

food

preparing approaches can be helpful to reduce

this

rate.

For instance

, a recent study in Iran indicates that the rate of fatness between

people

who have been educated in

food

science is 60 per cent lower than the others.

On the other hand

, it is argued by some that educational institutes should put a premium on the other lessons as opposed to foods.

People

often have

this

opinion because

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other ways.

In other words

, it is an experimental skill and it is not necessary to be taught in schools and universities.

In addition

,

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is a common belief that

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the majority of

people

.

That is

to say, other sciences not only guarantee the children's future occupations but

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making higher salaries.

For example

, in Iran, the

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of the public who have studied in

food

majors is 20 per cent lower than the

people

with the same grades in other fields. In conclusion,

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both groups have their justifications, I undoubtedly claim that gaining knowledge about dishes and the way they are prepared is completely beneficial. Given

this

situation, it seems to me that these kinds of lessons are better to be a

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part of schools

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curriculums

curriculum

.