Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The discourse regarding the purpose of studying in higher

education

becomes a compelling topic these days because numerous individuals state that it assists them to reach their dream job in the best position.

However

,

others

, including me, deny it since their

knowledge

and experience is not only for them

,

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but

also

for

society

.

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essay will explain both arguments through some examples.

To begin

with, getting a degree through tertiary

education

will help

people

to gain the best and highest position in their job and earn a huge amount of money. Most

people

are motivated by these opinions,

for example

, some Indonesians. There is a stereotype among citizens during studying in the university which improves their life, especially in a work-life, as long as they pursue a qualified degree.

Thus

, the higher the background

education

, the more prestigious their career.

On the contrary

,

others

assume that pursuing higher

education

is not only for themselves

,

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but

also

for their

society

. As

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,

people

will always need

others

to help them. Because of

this

phenomenon,

people

ought to share their

knowledge

and experience during

study

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in the university by being a speaker in a seminar or workshop or educating underprivileged children,

for instance

. By doing those contributions, at the same time, it saves our

society

from stupidity and jobless citizens for future generations in the long term.

Furthermore

, it means that their

knowledge

is applicable

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society

.

As a result

, their time, experience, and

knowledge

are worthwhile for

society

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movements, not only for their personal life. To sum up, many

people

today argue that the goal of learning in university is obtaining a better job, while

others

disagree with

this

statement since as human beings, the impact of

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is supposed to be much more balanced between our needs and the public.