You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there. Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter, -Explain how you heard about the job -Describe the kind of job you would like to have -Give details of your experience and qualifications

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the
store
manager
position
that you advertised in The Sunday Morning newspaper
last
Monday. I found
this
position
suits my future career aspiration as I have been working as a
store
manager
assistant
for almost 4 years now. I am keen to take up new challenges with more responsibilities like the
position
you advertised. I have been working in the retail industry for more than 8 years, which includes the
assistant
position
I mentioned earlier. I started to work as a
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storekeeper
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store keeper
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at a small clothing
store
outside of Sydney city right after my graduation from the design faculty of the University of New South Wales. I quickly get promoted as a senior fashion specialist because many customers felt satisfied with my service, and it generated a sustainable profit for the small
store
. Not very long after, the
store
manager hired me as the
assistant
to replace the previous
assistant
who left the company, and that because my performance was excellent too. Thank you for your attention and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Sur
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