The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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of purchasing on the

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or not. I completely disagree with

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opinion due to a vast range of reasons and some of them will be addressed in

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essay. The main reason why I believe some stores are not likely to be replaced by online shopping is that buying some products on the

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is not trustworthy for the majority of people.

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, these kinds of stuff should be touched in order to be sure about their qualities,

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, these kinds of businesses are not

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replaceable

.

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, a recent study in Iran indicates that 80 per cent of the crowd suppose that purchasing these goods via

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internet

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wast

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of money. Another reason why I dispute

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notion is based on the fact that most of the population do not have

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constant access to the

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.

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, there are some individuals who are unable to use

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internet

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. To be more precise, they do not have any knowledge about

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,

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, not only they will not have abilities to do online shopping but

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they will not rely on that because they know nothing about it.

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, a recent survey which has been taken in Iran shows that more than 40 per cent of the individuals are absolutely unfamiliar with

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approach. In conclusion,

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it is a common belief that stores and shops in cities and towns will be closed because of the spreading of online markets, I strongly disagree with

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idea due to lack of knowledge about

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amonge

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among

the population and lack of possibility to sell some products in

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way.