Nowadays,
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, pop musicians or sports stars are becoming one of
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highest paid jobs. We all at least
some
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of
this
. The big fancy houses, luxury cars or yachts,
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are just some of
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equipment. Is
this
fact good for us? Is
this
right for our society? Some people
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debate on
this
issue.
Some of them believe
this
high
payment
is wrong. They believe those stars or musicians didn'
t
really improve our society too much. They did
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some
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for our spiritual world.
However
, those contributions are far behind scientists, politicians, doctors and so on. Sadly, we can not live on the songs, the films. Those arts are great, but they aren'
t
great enough to
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such
big
payment
gap between other jobs. In my country, my teacher, basically
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unknown scientist, only has 700 dollars per month.
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low since famous
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endless zero behind their
payment
account.
However
, the other side of people think their
payment
is rightful and I am one of them. I don'
t
really love
this
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unbelievable high
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is the result of
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our attention to them. In
this
digital world, attention means money.
That is
the new rule of our society so there
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nothing wrong. As for those scientists or doctors, some of us even can'
t
them before we need them.
So, in my opinion, these
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with uncountable zero are rightful.
However
, we should rethink
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it. Why
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spend so much attention on those
? Why we don'
t
care about other jobs which are means
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us.
That is
the thing that we should change.