The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to provide free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern scenario,many individuals tend to commute by private
transports
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instead
of using public vehicles,
therefore
this
is one of the main reasons to cause overcrowding,so some
people
consider that the government can be solved
this
issue by ensuring buses and trains without taking money from the public,but I disaccord with
this
view.
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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,if authorities start ensuring free services to
people
,
then
our economy may fall down.
However
,
government
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can ensure more vehicles for
people
by reducing transport costs.
For instance
, nowadays,buses and
auto rickshaws
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have increased their ticket price due to fuels
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a profound demand in terms of costs,so
this
is the main reason for
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their cars and bikes.
Consequently
,
traffic
jam
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will be higher on the roads. On another hand,it is not only the
government
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right to alleviate the
traffic
but
also
the humans
also
can participate in
this
program by taking several measures.
Firstly
,
people
should walk
for
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shorter distances
instead
of using cars.In order to
this
way,our world
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from trade.
Moreover
,we can alleviate it by following the
traffic
rules,so authorities facilitate many
traffic
lights on the roads.
for example
,countries like the USA implements
traffic
rules strictly imposed,
therefore
this
country maintains
a
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low congestion. To conclude,every citizen has the privilege to lessen the
traffic
jam,so everyone
try
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to use
the
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public vehicles rather than private
transports
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.Solutions are in terms of walking for shorter distances as well as following
traffic
rules,so I disaccord with
this
statement.
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