The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to provide free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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modern scenario,many individuals tend to commute by private

transports

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instead

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of using public vehicles,

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this

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is one of the main reasons to cause overcrowding,so some

people

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consider that the government can be solved

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issue by ensuring buses and trains without taking money from the public,but I disaccord with

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view.

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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,if authorities start ensuring free services to

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,

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our economy may fall down.

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,

government

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can ensure more vehicles for

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by reducing transport costs.

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, nowadays,buses and

auto rickshaws

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have increased their ticket price due to fuels

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a profound demand in terms of costs,so

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is the main reason for

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use

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their cars and bikes.

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,

traffic

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jam

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will be higher on the roads. On another hand,it is not only the

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right to alleviate the

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but

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the humans

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can participate in

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program by taking several measures.

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,

people

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should walk

for

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apply

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shorter distances

instead

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of using cars.In order to

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way,our world

free

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from trade.

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,we can alleviate it by following the

traffic

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rules,so authorities facilitate many

traffic

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lights on the roads.

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,countries like the USA implements

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rules strictly imposed,

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this

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country maintains

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low congestion. To conclude,every citizen has the privilege to lessen the

traffic

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jam,so everyone

try

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to use

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apply

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public vehicles rather than private

transports

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transport

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.Solutions are in terms of walking for shorter distances as well as following

traffic

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rules,so I disaccord with

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statement.