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With the development of tourism, more and more cheap and discount fights are made available to holidaymakers. Some environmental groups claim that governments should tax air traffic more because its growth has a tremendous impact on the environment.

#development #tourism #discount #fights #holidaymakers #groups #governments #tax #air #traffic #growth #impact #environment
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 I grew up in a fully developed world. I enjoy the convenience that
the
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modern society
have
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. I don't agree with
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 should tax higher on air traffic.
Environment
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The environment
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 has been a controversial issue and there are lots of ways to solve
this
 problem.
Firstly
, we can reduce the flights of
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the airplane
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airplane
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airplanes
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. High taxes
of
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 air traffic can't really lessen the
environment
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environmental
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 problem since
wealth
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people
 won't care
the
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 money spent. Poor
people
 may be deprived of the right to go aboard.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
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 could limit the number of
people
travel
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 overseas. When the number travels reduce, the number use of
airplane
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 reduce.
Thirdly
,
government
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the government
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 should develop more on local travels, encouraging
people
 to travel in their own country. Environmental issues should give
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a professional
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professional
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professionals
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 to deal with.
Government
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The government
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 could
also
 make new laws to predict
environment
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environmental
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 damage. Many ways can solve
environment
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environmental
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 problems. Strike a balance between air traffic and
environment
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the environment
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 may be the best way for everyone and
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the economic
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economic
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