These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, there is much discussion with regard to

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out from the hometown.It is argued that there are a

lot

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of

people

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move

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to the

city

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when they are mature. I believe that there are a

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of advantages for moving to the

city

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which was developed

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as the

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has a

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of

companies

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which is international

companies

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or huge

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and they can reach educations in the

city

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which has quality but there is

disavantage

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disadvantage

that can not be overlooked

suchas

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such as

the

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congention

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congestion

convention

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in the

city

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. On the one side of benefits when

people

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growthup

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growth up

growth

and

moveto

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move to

the

the

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city

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. The

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advantage is that has a

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of

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which is accepted

from

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worldwide and they has a

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of

opputunity

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opportunity

for getting the job.

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,

Bangkok

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which is the

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capital of

Thailand. There are a

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of rural

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to

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for finding

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job because has a

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of department

that

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companies

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would like to hire.

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,

companies

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in

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which is

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enormous

companiesand

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companies and

international

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companies

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such

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as Shoppee company , CP company which has a good paid.

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companies in

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rural

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factory. In

additional

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, The

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has a

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of

university

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and

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can reach educations

that

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is

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very

convenience

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.

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has a

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lot of

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good

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university which

is

garanteed

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guaranteed

from worldwide and got a top rank

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university

such

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as CU , TU or KU. Everyone can learn and get free courses for developing with the life from the university.

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,

people

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in urban would like to

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which was developed.For good life and quality life.

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side

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such as

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very bad. A good case

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point is

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has

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which is very

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terrible

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the

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office

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least 1 hour because the

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bad.

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not have a problem with

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. In conclusion, the

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there are

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of

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from rural

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move to

the

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because the

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has a

lotof

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lot of

benefits

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as chances for finding the job or educations that everyone can reach but there is a negative side that

people

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can not be overlooked as the

trafficis

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traffic is

bad.