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There is an increasing population on the planet, and people are running out of water, food, and To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

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With the number of
people
 rising on the earth, limited natural resources like drinkable water and food are getting scarce. Unless immediate and actionable
measure
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are
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 not taken,
population
 explosion will bring devastating effects for our habitable planet. According to
the
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recent statistics, human beings are not only living
long
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 life
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 but
also
 producing more kids across the globe. Innovation in science and especially, medicine brought an end to the sudden deaths because of the various diseases.
Rise
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 in
population
 brought
exponential
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 increase in
consumption
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 of food and water.
Therefore
, under-developed nations are already facing scarcity of grains and vegetables, leaving poor
people
 to sleep with
empty
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stomach
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.
Furthermore
, round the year availability of drinkable water is becoming
privilege
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 in many parts of the world. Overpopulation is causing shattering effects in the food chain of
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nature. It has become
utmost
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 necessity to stop
population
 explosion and take strict
measure
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 to control it. Governments must come up with lucrative schemes to motivate
people
 for nuclear
family
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families
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 as well as punishing guidelines for those, who produce more than two children. Especially, countries with
high
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 density of
population
 need to act upon managing
population
.
On the other hand
, religious and corporate organisations must preach and advocate to limit the size of the family.
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Stake holders
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 should educate the poor,
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underprivileged
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under privileged
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underprivileged
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, marginalised and untrodden sections of the society.
Inspite
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In spite
 of government measures, real success in controlling
population
 growth lies with common
people
 understanding the dire need of the situation, planning
small
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 and happy
family
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families
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, resulting
into
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resourceful
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the resourceful
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 planet.
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