In cities and town all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. what are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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pollution,
that
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apply

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which is increasing rapidly, is the most threatening issue the world faces today. In
this
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21th
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21st

The number 21th may have an improper ending. Consider changing it.

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century
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,century

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this
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is a major
issues
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issue

The subject or subject complement of the sentence (issues) does not appear to agree with the verb is. Consider changing the noun form.

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a high volume of traffic but
first
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of
all
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,all

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we need to
undersand
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understand

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what is leading to
such
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an
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apply

The indefinite article an may not be required with the plural noun issues in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.

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issues
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issue

It seems that issues may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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there some several steps which can be taken to tackle
this
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problem
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which
i
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I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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will examine in
this
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further
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essay. To Commence with,
Firstly
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, the main issue is that all over the world the high number of
vehicle
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the vehicle
a vehicle

The noun phrase vehicle seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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who
people
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are
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are used
are using

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use
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to their transportation and
that is
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why traffic is a is
big
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a big

The noun phrase big problem seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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problem
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. In
addisionally
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additionally
additional

If you don’t want addisionally to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

,
this
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issue is Create
a
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apply

The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun pollution in your sentence. Consider removing it.

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noise pollution and
also
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air
polluction
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pollution

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which is
affecte
Correct your spelling
affected
affecting

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people
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people's

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body and
Meantal
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Mental

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heath
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health

The word heath doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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who are live that rush area.
For example
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, A
policman
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policeman

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Spend a whole day in
polluted
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a polluted

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area
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, as a result,

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as a result
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he or she feel
a
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apply

The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun stress in your sentence. Consider removing it.

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stress all day and
also
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creat
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create

The word creat doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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a
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apply

It is unlikely that your sentence needs the article a before some. Consider deleting the article.

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some health
problem
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because of air
polluction
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pollution

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. To
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solve
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solve

The word slove doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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slove
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solve
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this
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problem
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,
People
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are avoid
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avoid

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to
use
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a high volume
Vehicals
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Vehicles

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and
replace
Wrong verb form
replacing

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it
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them

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to
Change preposition
with

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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electrical cars.
Secondly
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, most of the
people
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use
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their own car or bike to go
thier
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their

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work place
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workplace

The word work place seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

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.
Instead
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of, they can
use
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transport
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a transport

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facility.
On
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In

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the
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apply

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other word, In one particular
area
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,area

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their
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there

The word their doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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so many
people
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are
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who are

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Updown daily in their own car so
instead
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of they can
use
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

bus
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the bus

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or train or taxi
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, as a result,

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as a result
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It will help to reduce
traffic
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the traffic

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Use synonyms
Use synonyms
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems

It seems that problem may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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. In conclusion, despite
of
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apply

The preposition of after despite may be unnecessary. Consider removing the second preposition.

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own car or bike, bicycle and walking
prefere
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prefer

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most when going in
a
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a a

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short distance which is helpful to reduce noise and are pollution.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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