Being a celebrity-such as film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
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, its merits outshined
its demerits. In a subsequent ,paragraph I intend to shed light on the given topic with a proper conclusion and an appropriate illustration.
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, the first and foremost benefit of being an elite class is , they
earned handsome income and incentives from films, brand endorsements, programmes and many more. Correct word choice
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Secondly
, they received high-class services from various government and non-government departments. For instance
, most of
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Besides
, they received a plethora of gifts not only from companies but also
from their fans and followers.
On the other hand
, being a public figure has some drawbacks as they have to socialize their life on numerous social apps such
as Instagram, Facebook, Twitter and many more, which sometimes backfire on them. For example
, the case of body-shaming has increased against the female actresses on their public posts. Moreover
, fraudsters can use high profile
names to gain undue wealth and business advantages. To Vindicate, in India recently a cone man imposed as a friend of many celebrities, cheats various Add a hyphen
high-profile
businessman
and blackmail them.
To summarize, as discussed in the aforementioned argument I can conclude that, being a Fix the agreement mistake
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star or sports personality is not an easy task, as they are bonded with ethics and social responsibility. Change the noun form
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Therefore
, they had to live life in a prudent and pragmatic way.Submitted by VIP2VERMA on
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task response
The essay provides a clear response to the prompt by discussing the benefits and problems of being a celebrity. However, more examples could be included to strengthen the argument.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present and help in framing the discussion. To improve coherence, ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs and provide more linking words to connect ideas.
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