Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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boost confident para2 quality

dont

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don't

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appearance

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outputs is more significant in

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atmosphere.

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essay sides productivity over

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good-looking apparel but will

provides

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each argumentative's

points

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for both sides. Analysing freedom of clothes selection creates

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productive environment, which outweighs the feeling of being a

team

by wearing

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.

Firstly

, well-dressed workers will be more confident and feel unity across the

team

.

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,

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Tinley

and Brent

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a navy blue

uniform

with

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tie, which

seperates

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separates

them

apart

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other legal companies. Interestingly,

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code is boost employees'

confident

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substantially because it produces

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feeling of being one of the

team

.

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,

this

makes clear that

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smartly is highly

benefitial

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beneficial

to the organization's growth.

On the other hand

, it is better to wear apparel

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on

individual's

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an individual's

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preferences.

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, Google allows their workers to wear anything,

this

results in mounting performance later on. In fact,

"comfortable"

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environment has proved to be the best at creating creative

work

in

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period of time.

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makes

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the distinct

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claim that

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comfortably is highly

benefitial

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beneficial

to the company's growth. In conclusion,

focus

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less on

appearance

is better than the strict

uniform

; our analysis above provides

the

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supports

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for both sides. In the

last

year, psychologists debunked all the claims; in fact,

appearance

is irrelevant to productivity.