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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In the advanced age, people can see various advertisements
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 TV,
shopping
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 malls and so forth. Many corporations emphasize
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that their goods are novel in some way. The essay will discuss why they advertise that way and it blows whether positive or negative influence in the following paragraphs before leading to a logical conclusion. Generally, businesses need to focus on consumers' interest to show their products more special than other companies'
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. For
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 each corporate, have the same functions, it can drive different results from how to advertise them. To be specific, as many are interested in new
things
, technologies and so on, it is easy to be interested in products, which have words like new. Even some always look forward to creative
things
. In my opinion, advertising, which makes
customers
 interested in goods, can help to develop positively in both people and businesses. On the one hand,
customers
 who got the item
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 introduced that the product was new, will have an achievement because of the item that many people were interested in or even some wanted to grab.
On the other hand
,
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, the more interesting, they can attain
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 higher amount of productivity.
Thus
,
customers
' interest makes
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 effect on selling. In conclusion, a myriad of companies
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advertise
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 their products showed they are novel
things
 in some way. I firmly insist that speciality or creativity are important to
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 in a variety of competitions.
Therefore
, in my opinion, advertisement attracting
customers
 by using the word 'new' is at least necessary to compete with other items and it can make
customers
 more confident and
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 situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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