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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore all students should wear school uniform. Do you agree or disagree

#students #focus #classroom #show #status #clothes #school #uniform
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study
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more
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moe
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 important than wearing fashionable
clothoes
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clothes
 in today's world. I totally agree with the given statement and put forth some of
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 in upcoming paragraphs. There are some rules in the
school
 which students have to follow like wearing
school
umiform
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uniform
uniforms
 in
school
everyday
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 because it shows the identity of children as
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a student
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student
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students
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 of
ine
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one
 particular
school
 through which they are easily recognizable to other persons that
this
 pupil belongs to which institute. Wearing
se
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the
 dress shows
the
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equality in all students
i
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in
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the eyes of their teachers. No one has to
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discrimination
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while
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 studying at
school
. Modern or fashionable clothes are attractive and expensive which are not suitable to wear while learning at
school
 because
this
 does not show the identity of
student
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a student
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 as a scholar. They are allowed to wear modern clothes
in
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 parties not regularly.
School
 dree is the only best option to wear daily because it shows the personality of
student
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students
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 which is more important than fashionable clothes. Childre go
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to schools
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schools
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school
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 to learn something not to do fashions. So, they have to concentrate on their study which helps in making their better future. Conclusion -
school
 uniforms are
also
 a part of learning from which students learn
importance
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the importance
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 of equality between them. They are able to concentrate on
study
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the study
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 because
school
 dress
create
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a
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 inner feeling in them that they come to
school
 for education not to show how
much
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fashionable they are.
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