Some people believe that visitor to other countries should follow local customs and behavior, others disagree and think that the host country welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In
this
modern scenario,many individuals tend to go to foreign nations for
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better education and a trip,so a proportion of society thinks that tourists must follow that particular nation's heritage and tradition.Whereas,others claim that the government of that
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always welcomes irrespective of the conventional disparities.According to me,it is the best way to allow all kinds of cultures.
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essay will discuss both views. To embark on,there is one reason why guests have to accompany their systems is they do not want to spoil their nation in terms of wearing clothes and having
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.
For instance
,these days,many Indian
people
go to other empires for getting a good occupation,
therefore
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of
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style may be affected on their routine pattern,whether it is
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optimistic or pessimistic.
Furthermore
,if all different types of
people
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,
then
their way of talking would be damaged by other
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language.
For example
,generally
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people
communicate with others in their own mother tongue,so it may be influenced
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their local speech. On another hand,others
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permit
all types of
people
without any cultural differences because there are some merits in terms of economy and increases country's status.
Firstly
,host
countries
can
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their financial status by allowing each and every person
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the appearance of visitors.
For example
,they can earn income from students who are studying in that particular region.
Consequently
,the economy might have raised.
Secondly
,host
countries
will aware of other
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ups and down.In
this
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they may be improved their culture,so
this
is
also
one of the main reasons to allow different kinds of
people
. To conclude,
although
some
people
do not accept other nations to reside in their empires due to disparities of customs in terms of spoiling their nation and language.some host
countries
allow them irrespective of any cultural differences as they may earn income and status,but according to me,the latter decision is the best one.
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