Being a celebrity-such as film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Nowadays, there are occupations
who
provided by Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
society
. If we look into social Correct your spelling
media
medias
, there's Correct your spelling
media
a
plenty of influencers who influence Remove the article
apply
people
to do and behave something like they do. Let's take a look for an example of job
that influences others' Add an article
a job
perspective
, Fix the agreement mistake
perspectives
celebrity
.
Celebrity
is a person
who entertain
Change the verb form
entertains
people
with his/
her talents. When we saw the movie, the person
who takes a role is a film star. Based on many perspectives, there are
a Change the verb form
is
society
who
don't support the role of Correct pronoun usage
that
celebrity
and some society
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societies
do
. Change the verb form
does
For example
, many people
think that a celebrity
, a film star, makes a priviledge
to Correct your spelling
privilege
society
to become a famous person
despite of
Remove the preposition
apply
become
a smart Change the verb form
becoming
person
. Become
a Wrong verb form
Becoming
celebrity
itself could be benefitial
for certain Correct your spelling
beneficial
people
,
because some peers think that Remove the comma
apply
people
who jump into entertainment
world are Correct article usage
the entertainment
people
who polish their potentials
in acting, singing, dancing and etcetera. Fix the agreement mistake
potential
However
, become
a Wrong verb form
becoming
celebrity
also
could be problem
, Add an article
a problem
the problem
for instance
, they will be lack of
privacy, since the journalist and media are following them Change preposition
apply
everyday
and Correct your spelling
every day
everytime
. It will limit the freedom of Replace the word
every time
actress
, Fix the agreement mistake
actresses
actor
, Fix the agreement mistake
actors
musician
and etcetera.
Fix the agreement mistake
musicians
In addition
, there is also
an occupation who
entertain Correct pronoun usage
that
people
by
their talent, which is sports, Change preposition
with
for
example
an Add the comma(s)
,example
athlete
. An athlete
tends to entertain people
by
hisChange preposition
with
/
her accomplishments. If he/
she contributes to some competitions, the euphoria of the olympic
is legit. Change the capitalization
Olympic
Olympics
People
are trying to support them because he/
she could give a
achievement to the country. One of the good points Remove the article
apply
become
an Fix the infinitive
to become
athlete
is study is not necessary for the athletes because they will contribute by their physical power and skills. Some people
also
think that become
an Wrong verb form
becoming
athlete
will be famous by their capability to narrowed his/
her skills to specific sports. Although
, based of
Change preposition
on
Correct your spelling
holders
older
olders
point of view, Correct article usage
an olders
become
an Wrong verb form
becoming
athlete
is one of the easiest job
because an Change to a plural noun
jobs
athlete
doesn't study hard.
To sum up, two particular jobs such
as film star and an athlete
have positive and negative perspectives to certain people
. Yet, every job
has their specializations that makes
the Change the verb form
make
job
is hard to achieve and to accomplish. It is contingent to
Change preposition
on
people
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