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Being a celebrity-such as film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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These days
 a lot of
people
 struggle to become
a
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famous person and well-known as well as having a lot of money , but
definitely
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this
 will have some
disavangeous
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disadvantageous
 . I am going to outline my reasons for
this
 issue .
firstly
 , famous
people
 sometimes become the focus of
the
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society .The media and
people
 always love to gossip and talk about celebrities and famous
spory
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sports
sporty
people
 and that may intrude upon their life and interfere with their social and daily life .
for example
 , many celebrities flee the
paperatzi
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paparazzi
 and reporters and never stay in
place
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a place
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 where crowds of
people
 exist .
secondly
, if they do something wrong it will quickly set a bad example for
younge
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young
younger
people
 . many
people
 see celebrities and
spory
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sporty
sports
people
 as role models and always look up to them
therefore
 if they
don' t
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don't
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 pay attention to their deeds it will have
adverse
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 impact on society and they again become the
center
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 of attention and
this
 will destroy their reputation or even
balcken
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blacken
 their name. in conclusion, being a celebrity may bring
a
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alot
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lot
a lot
 of
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advantages
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such
 as popularity , wealth and prosperity .
howerver
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however
disadvantagous
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disadvantageous
disadvantages
 like being the
center
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 of attention and careful consideration of their behaviour seriously outweighs the
advantegous
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advantageous
advantages
.
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