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Being a celebrity-such as film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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People have different opinions on whether becoming celebrities is beneficial or not. Some assert that there are many drawbacks.
However
, I strongly believe that the advantages of being a famous star overwhelm the disadvantages. On the one hand, there are several difficulties.
Firstly
, well-known stars suffer from a lack of privacy as the public be , come nosy about their
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 celebrities’ life. Since ordinary people desire to become like VIPs, they sometimes interfere
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 lives.
For example
, recent media reports that 30% of successful movie stars and athletes feel uncomfortable due to the scarcity of privacy. As the example clearly illustrates, some folks tend to forget that their excessive interest disturbs their best stars.
Secondly
, not only can the interest cause disturbance of successful people’s lives
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it may
also
 bother celebrities family
such
 as children and relatives since publicity target everyone related to Well known people.
On the other hand
, VIPs can easily earn money due to their reputation and prestige. As their pictures and speech play key a factor in advertising products, many companies are willing to invest funds in them.
For instance
, a posting
that is
 written on social media by Hae Gyo Song who is a very popular actor is worth 50 million dollars.
Therefore
, it is evident that
such
 well-known actors can gain money by marketing. What is more, celebrities are benefited from public places. They do not need to stand in a line, and they are provided good services from crowds. In conclusion, while I accept that being superstars can sometimes be rather annoyed due to a lack of privacy, there is no doubt that they are well paid with their popularity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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