You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Rahul, Hope

your

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are doing well, I am writing

this

letter to

asking

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your help to find out some part-time jobs for me.

Further

to our telephonic discussion and as you are aware that, by

next

month

begining

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beginning

i

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am

comming

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coming

to

canada

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Canada

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for studying my MBA from

toronto

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Toronto

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university

which is

two year

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program whereas during my study

i

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can work

atleast

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at least

48 hours in

week

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a week

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as per

canada

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Canada

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government regulation.

Furthermore

, I would like to inform you that,the

university

classes time are in the morning 7 to 12 o'clock and after

that

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i

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have no

another

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works so in

this

free time

i

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can start part-time jobs,

this

will help me to gain some market experience which

is help

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me in the future during the job searching after study my

university

course

as well as

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i

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can earn some money which

help

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me to pay the

university

fees and my daily expenses. Since you are staying there

from

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last

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five years, I

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believe

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belive

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believe

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that you have some networks and friends in the market who can help me to find out part-time job

also

i

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remember you were

also

doing part-time work during your

stuies

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studies

.

i

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can work in

resturants

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restaurants

, shops,

fectories

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factories

or offices. I will be

greatfull

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grateful

for your help. I looking forward to seeing you soon. Lost of love Jadav Raghuvir