You recently organised and old a meeting for your company. Which took place in local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the managers should do to improve the food in future

Dear sir, I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter regarding a meeting held in your hotel at

last

Linking Words

Monday 22nd February. We take feedback from participants of meeting while all are enjoying the facility of the hotel and happy with the behaviour of the staff. They all give positive feedback for the service of the receptionist and the Organisation of the event.

In addition

Linking Words

, They are quite unhappy with the

quality

Use synonyms

of lunch which you served for all. Specially

quality

Use synonyms

of bread and buttermilk was so poor because of

this

Linking Words

food one of the members have caused food poisoning and no any kind of sweet is included in

menu

Add an article

the menu

show examples

and the level of spice is high so all are not Habitat to eat sufficiently.

Finally

Linking Words

, I want to give some suggestions to improve your food

quality

Use synonyms

especially

Add the comma(s)

,especially

show examples

for the lunch menu. Incline

quality

Use synonyms

of bread and buttermilk and add a variety of

sweet

Fix the agreement mistake

sweets

show examples

while

also

Linking Words

use

Wrong verb form

using

show examples

a suitable Spice for items. Yours sincerely, Hemal