You recently organised and old a meeting for your company. Which took place in local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the managers should do to improve the food in future

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding a meeting held in your hotel at
last
Monday 22nd February. We take feedback from participants of meeting while all are enjoying the facility of the hotel and happy with the behaviour of the staff. They all give positive feedback for the service of the receptionist and the Organisation of the event.
In addition
, They are quite unhappy with the
quality
of lunch which you served for all. Specially
quality
of bread and buttermilk was so poor because of
this
food one of the members have caused food poisoning and no any kind of sweet is included in
menu
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the menu
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and the level of spice is high so all are not Habitat to eat sufficiently.
Finally
, I want to give some suggestions to improve your food
quality
especially
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for the lunch menu. Incline
quality
of bread and buttermilk and add a variety of
sweet
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sweets
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while
also
use
Wrong verb form
using
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a suitable Spice for items. Yours sincerely, Hemal
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