Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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in distinct aspects

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society. While some hold a strong view that

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should play the same role as men in

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and military

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a statement that they are improper to these kinds of works. I contended that

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should not engage in these types of

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because of numerous convincing reasons. Obviously, there is a wide range of justifications why

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are inappropriate with

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and military training.

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is supposed to be highly required in terms of

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ability which is

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are not adequately able to take on as men.

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, when encountering perpetrators like kidnappers, males are likely to be more clear-headed and powerful while chasing them.

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and

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are not suitable for females. While plenty of

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about

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capability of

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widely acknowledged, they should be encouraged to play a part in these

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day and age, the problems

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no longer only associates with armed issues, but

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involved in unarmed problems needed to be computerized. In

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, if females gain enough knowledge in

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field, they have

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function to meet the requirement as

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, in the United States, each

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station contains a place namely Tactic Operation Centre controlled by

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as they have a firm grasp in analyzing data and digital information which is useful for finding out and condemning offenders.

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,

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should be stimulated to take part in

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and armed

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. To sum up,

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and

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compulsory more physical power which

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are insufficient to adapt, they should participate in different aspects of these

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