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How frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurant between 2003 and 2013? summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

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The diagram outlines the frequency of having fast
Food
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 meals by Americans at restaurants in a decade. It is
also
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 noticed that more Americans chose not to eat junk
food
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 as frequently as they do in the past.
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 with,
this
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 given chart represent six categories of Americans regarding their habitual of having junk
food
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 meals at a bistro. Overall, it is clear that almost half of the population in America ate fast
food
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 in eateries once a
week
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 or a few
times
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 a month between 2003 and 2013. And
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 chart describes that there are the increasing trends between a few
times
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 a
week
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 and once or twice a month moment of people in America who choose a restaurant as their place to eat junk
food
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.
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, the bar chart
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 depicts the decreasing percentage phenomenon of the community who decided to have meals every day, several
times
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 a
week
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, and once a
week
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. Fascinatingly, around the same percentage of US citizens never ate at
such
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 restaurants, as the data shows.
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,
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 the populations in America who eat fast
food
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 eateries once or twice a month fluctuated in a decade, mostly the percentage of each category is decreasing and increasing. Again, the ratio of people who chose
ate
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to eat
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 at the fast-
food
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 eateries several
times
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 a
week
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 increased a fifth in 2006 before it diminished to just over fifteen
percent
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 in 2013.

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