Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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aren’t qualified to be in charge of political duty, while others consider that age is not the main factor but ability. In

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will discuss both sides of

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issue and conclude by giving my own point of view. On one hand, since the adolescents are young, they may have limited experience.

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they might graduate from

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or have remarkable master’s

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, the lack of experience in

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field might lead them

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may hurt the country or even make the whole society rebellion. What’s more, little experience is likely to make a reckless decision, which means it’s better

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seniors

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lead them and give some objective advice.

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, people may say that it is important to give younger counterparts chances, and

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may have several reasons.

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, for those who

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prospective and creative ideas for the nations, it may bring some unexpected positive stimulation toward the country, which is unlikely to be seen from those conventional senior governors.

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, adolescents are willing to accept

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point of

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from various parties which provide the society

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more democratic and harmonious country. To conclude, whether youth should take duty in the city hall is a

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sword. I personally think it’s worthy to give them a try,

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, the young potential should be supervised by the elders in some condition.