Some people feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the gender ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether
students
should study in co-educational complexes or single-sex
schools
. I will discuss both of these points of view in
this
essay;
however
, in my opinion, it is extremely beneficial if genders are separated in
schools
. On the one hand, It is often believed by some that there should be mixed-education in
schools
to boost the
confident
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level of
students
. It is completely true because when girls and boys interact with each other on daily basis in
schools
,
this
develops confidence in them to confront people of
opposite
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gender which will aid them in their practical lives. A recent study in Norway has proven that graduates in the employment market, who have completed their studies in mixed-sex
schools
, are comparatively more comfortable and confident than their counterparts.
Therefore
, they attain
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to face and deal with their colleagues in work life and their spouses in
metrimonial
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matrimonial
lives.
Hence
on
this
account, co-educational
schools
can be considered a good choice.
On the other hand
, single-gender
schools
assist
students
to learn in a relaxed environment where they can fully focus on their careers.
For instance
, it is particularly true for the shy and
introvert
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pupils, as they often get confused and feel difficulty in learning properly when they compete with their classmates of
opposite
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sex.
Similarly
, another problem may
arises
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when
students
develop feelings and affections for their opposing gender class fellows. They
leads
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to distraction and loss of focus on education.
Therefore
,
this
affects their studies and they do not perform
good
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in academia.
Thus
, single-sex
schools
are the best option to educate children. In conclusion,
although
there are some merits of co-education, I believe that separation of male and female pupils in
schools
is essential for them to concentrate fully on their education in a relaxed ambience.
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