many would argue that the expenditure on developmental activities is more significant, others and I feel that funds utilised on public welfare healthcare,
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because of people are more essential for a state than developmental activities.
essay discusses both sides' arguments followed by my opinion on public welfare.
public well-being should be
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the highest priority to any state as these are very basic and essential for everyone. Providing better healthcare to the public will enable them to keep healthy which will have a positive effect on their lifestyle and
contribute to the GDP of a nation through their work produced in any sector.
, education plays an important role in nation-building. It enables more folk to acquire knowledge and skills in a particular field which ultimately
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a positive
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on their productivity and
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a good lifestyle. it is
agreed that funding for the welfare of the public is a very worthwhile decision.
, a person who graduates from a university with good skills and is employed in any sector indirectly
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to the development of that sector.
, many disagree and feel that developmental movement
as infrastructure, transportation,
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will enable the public to have a good environment, easy access to places or
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travel without any connectivity
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and good facilities
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the community etc.
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, it will significantly raise the borrowings of the government, which ultimately have more negative effects on the public like higher tax collection,
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issues and
essay disagrees investing in development action is more crucial than the former
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.
, it is always good to build a nation from what we have rather than borrowing from other sources.
, if a region is fully facilitated of amenities
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debt but the basic needs related facilities are not for the public
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converts into a hard condition to live there.
In conclusion,
the benefits of public prosperity, particularly health and education, allow better returns in the manner of
development of individuals, some still feel that society should be wary of
investment and not allow it, though ,as long as it is essential to keep in mind the importance of funding in public benefit, the educational and healthcare benefits are clearly positive.