It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The pie chart and table illustrate the information about inhabitants in Australia according to nationalities and areas. 53% per
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of Australia's population is Australian. 80 per
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of Australia’s population lives in cities and the remaining 20 per
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in villages.
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of other nationalities are twice as many as British . 89 per
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of British live in the
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and the remaining 11 per
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live outside the
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. Dutch make up 1 per
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and Dutch together make up the percentage of New Zealanders. (3%) 99% of
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nest in the
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and the remaining 1% live outside the
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. New Zealanders are 10 times more likely than
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of Dutch
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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