Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, Hope you and your family doing amazing, I am writing

this

letter with your advertisement for helping you in your house

summer. I saw the news in the newspaper. there are many different ways that I can help you .

firstly

, I was good at cooking ,so I can prepare your lunch and dinner.

secondly

, I have good experience in gardening that I can help you to wear your plant every day and weeding. the reason I apply for

this

job is that I was applying for my course study at Sunway college in Kuala Lumpur the capital of Malaysia, and mainly to earn my college fees .

In addition

, I was having a long summer holiday for about two months so I decided to find a job to reduce the financial problem of my family and earn some experience.

although

I will be free for all two months, I have to leave early on Monday evening as I was having a piano class every Monday night. I would be very appreciative if you give me

this

opportunity to be your helper. please feel free to contact me if you need any additional information. Yours faithfully, Lim

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