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the comparison of the home and international student of both boys and girls between 2010 and 2012.

The given bar chart illustrates the comparison of the
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 and international
students
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 of
both
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 boys and girls between 2010 and 2012. Overall,it is clear that the was an increase in the number of British
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students
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 in
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 boys and girls and the number was higher in women,while man has the higher rate of the international student. According to the chart, in 2010, men indicated the highest amount of
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students
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,with almost 40 people,higher than their international
students
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 by almost one time.
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, a year later, its figure dropped dramatically to the same level as their foreign student numbers,at just under 25%. By 2012, there was an upward trend in
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home
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 junior and foreign junior numbers, with around 43 population in the former and almost 40 persons in the latter.
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, women experienced a sharp increase in
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home
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 and foreign
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. While women's
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 junior figures rose significantly from Just over 30 persons in 2010 to exactly 45 three years later,making its figure outnumbering the men, their international student figures
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 went up minimally from just under 15 population at the beginning to exactly 20 population in the end.

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