You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while your are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this fiend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Anne,
How are you? I hope
this
letter finds you well. As you already know, I am planning to attend my Master's degree at Queen's College in London. I am excited that my course starts in April this
year. Having said that, I am also
anxious about expenses during my study
, as things are relatively expensive in London. I'm wondering if you could help me find a part-time job there and get some references for the job, so I can cover my personal expenses.
My course will take approximately two years to complete. The classes will be normally held on weekdays and I will be free on weekends. It would be a great help if you could introduce me to any part-time job available around the University area and look for the classified section in the local newspaper.
I would really appreciate your help and support. Thank you in advance.
Best wishes,
Naomi UmamiFix the agreement mistake
studies
Submitted by yyurienn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
The letter contains all the required details about study plans and the reason for seeking a part-time job. Good task response.
coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is clear and the tone is suitable for a formal letter. Improve the greetings and closing to make the letter more polite and friendly.