you went to the local hospital's emergency department with your young child who had several stomach pains. you had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and while you are were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff. write a letter to the registrar complaining about the service you received

Dear Sir I hope your hospital is growing day by day but there have been some problems with
people
. I know very well your all branches are strict under control of yours but in our areas branch hospital are not provide good service and
this
is my personal experience.
Moreover
, a few days ago I and my daughter visited your hospital which is located in our hometown. There are some stomach pains with my daughter, while we arrived in hospital I saw lots of
people
are in queue so I registered my child's name as a patient but my daughter's term in treatment after four hours,
this
is too much lately and my child has a lot of pains in her stomach.
Finally
, while we waited in the queue there your staff ignore us and I request too many
people
there in your staff but they are not answering to me so
this
is your poor service so please recruitment to others staff and guide to all of them and say to them to provide a special service and good behaviour with the patient and
people
.
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