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In Order To Solve Traffic Problems, Governments Should Tax Private Car Owners Heavily And Use The Money To Improve Public Transportation What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

#traffic #governments #tax #car #owners #money #transportation
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Road
traffic
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 congestion is one of the serious
problem
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problems
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conserned
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concerned
 by the authorities and it can
be sort
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 out by increasing
tax
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 for domestic vehicles meanwhile by using that
tax
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 amount, make public transportation more developed.
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both
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pros
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prons
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pros
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 and cons of
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 solution. To commence with, imposing
high
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a high
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 levy on
four wheelers
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four-wheelers
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 eventually decine private wheels on road resulted in
reduction
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a reduction
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 of
traffic
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 problems.
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,
environment
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 pollutions
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 as air pollution ,sound pollution etc. will be less.
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 by reducing motor vehicles we can preserve our oil resources.
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,if ten
people
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uses
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 bus
instead
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 of
thier
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their
 own vehicle for going to office
miminum
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minimum
 30
liters
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litres
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 of
feul
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fuel
 can be saved and
atleast
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at least
 one
percent
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per cent
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 reduction in
traffic
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 blocks. So for restricting vehicles on road , imposing high toll is one of the considerable methods which
authorites
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authorities
 can adopt. On the other side, introducing
high
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a high
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tariff
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tariffs
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 to private
four wheelers
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four-wheelers
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 affects only
below average
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below-average
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people
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. A large group of
poeple
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people
 who is using
four wheelers
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four-wheelers
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 every day can
affored
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afford
afforded
high
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a high
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 toll and they will definitely continue the same.
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 the other small group will suffer.
Ownering
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Owning
 a private
car
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 is a necessity
now a days
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nowadays
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 because of
this
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 fluctuating climate like high temperature with high humidity, heavy rain etc and imposing
high
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a high
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tax
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 on cars will
definitly
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definitely
 affect
below average
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below-average
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 group of
people
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 who are already using private transports for their day to day life.
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, in
canada
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Canada
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private
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a private
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car
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 is not a
luxuary
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luxury
 it's a necessity there because they have eight months of snown fall and
on
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 that time
its
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 very difficult to manage
their
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without a
car
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. So inducing
high
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a high
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 levy on
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the car
a car
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car
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cars
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 will affect common
people
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 very badly. To conclude, for regulating
traffic
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 blocks , inducing high
tax
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 on cars have
lot
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a lot
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 of positive sides and negative sides.
This
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traffic
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, controlling pollutions, etc
andon
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and on
 the other hand it affects poor
people
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 who eagerly wanted to buy a
car
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 of
thier
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their
this
 own and
people
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 living in highly fluctuating climate zone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traffic congestion
  • Emissions
  • Revenue generation
  • Public dissatisfaction
  • Political issues
  • Financial burden
  • Environmental benefits
  • Efficiency and accessibility
  • Taxation
  • Heavily taxing
  • Private car owners
  • Fund improvements
  • Discourage the use
  • Healthier environment
  • Public transport quality
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