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Most employers nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that cocial skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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 focus on social
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 for what purposes.There are those who say that social
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crucial extra
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 for success. I strongly believe that these
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 are really necessary to stay in a good position in the workplace. In
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 phenomenon is that many companies find out
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 employees who have good communication
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. these types of
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 have great self-confidence to communicate
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, in sales and marketing related jobs, employees should have self-dependence to persuade customers by giving
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 about their products.After that,their profit will be increased when the number of
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, in multinational jobs,workers have to communicate with foreigners.In
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 more crucial. Another reason why I agree with
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 plays an important role in the job area. In
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 industry,
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 work in a team and have a leader.If
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 and employees do not treat each other very well ,the project cannot be finished
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successfully .
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, in it related job, a whole project cannot be completed by
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 very early.
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 ,they solve it with 12 and 14 workers. In that case, acceptable behaviour can make a good relationship and energetic.
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 one can share
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 with others if another person
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 very well. to sum up, presently
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 cannot do anything very well because of the lack of social
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. if
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 have these
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 like communication
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 and good behaviour as well as academic
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.they will achieve good things in the professional life
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