The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart below illustrates the
percentage
of
water
used for different purposes in North America, South America, Europe,
Africa
, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
. In general, the
percentage
of used
water
has been classified into 3 different categories, industrial
use
, agricultural
use
and domestic
use
. In the category of industrial
use
, North
Africa
and Europe have the most
percentage
among the other 4
areas
which is 48 per
cent
and 53 per
cent
respectively.
However
,
in
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other
areas
such
as South
Africa
,
Africa
, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
has the least
percentage
of
water
used in Industrial.
In addition
, there are four
areas
that have the most perc
entage
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engage
of
water
used in agriculture in these three categories, 71 per
cent
in South America, 81 per
cent
in
Africa
and 84 per
cent
in South East
Asia
. Among them, central
Asia
has the biggest
percentage
with 88 per
cent
of the
water
that has been used in agriculture.
However
, the category of domestic
use
has the smallest
percentage
in most
areas
compared to industrial
use
and agricultural
use
. Interestingly, the
percentage
of domestic
use
water
is 2 per
cent
higher than industrial
use
in
Africa
and central
Asia
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, africa, asia, use, areas, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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