Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The number of
people
who prefer to live alone or in a shared flat has been increased. While there is a controversial argument that Use synonyms
this
trend would harm societies, I believe that it simultaneously has several benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, living alone might increase the risk of depression. If Linking Words
people
do not have efficient communication, they will have to face mental health problems. Use synonyms
In other words
, humans need to get emotional support from their families or close friends to remain healthy. They Linking Words
also
may feel bored in the case of loneliness for a long time. Linking Words
For example
, I used to live alone during my college and I became too introverted to go out and too bored to stay home. Another difficulty of living on our own would be in the time of emergencies. If a person, who lives alone, became ill, there would be no one to take care of her or him.
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On the other hand
, I think there are three main benefits Linking Words
besides
the above-mentioned disadvantages of living alone. Linking Words
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, it would make Linking Words
people
more independent and raise the feeling of responsibility. They need to learn housework Use synonyms
such
as cooking and cleaning on their own and Linking Words
also
, they should learn financial management to avoid pecuniary problems. Linking Words
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have more time to think and plan to reach their goals. They can Use synonyms
also
choose where to live to be close to their office or in the countryside. Linking Words
Finally
, they are free to have any lifestyle they want that may affect their motivation and discipline.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
there is a population who believe that living alone or with friends would negatively affect societies, in my opinion, Linking Words
this
trend would Linking Words
also
benefit communities.Linking Words
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