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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Advertising has been developed as one of the main pillars in
business
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 world.
Although
 there are multiple ways of advertising a
product
, it appears to be that
companies
 keep insisting on the new features their
product
 has and
this
 might not be a good idea.
First
 of all, it is important to say that marketing and advertising can make a difference in a competitive system.
Furthermore
,
companies
 need to show that their new
product
 is better than the previous ones and those from rival
companies
.
Thirdly
,
this
 forces
companies
 to innovate and improve their products.
For example
, Apple brings a new iPhone almost every year, reinventing it each time.
Although
 it might seem a good idea, actually
this
 kind of advertising could
possible
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 lead to the worst situation.
This
 is called aggressive marketing because it centres the consumer attention in a speci c characteristic and ignoring the rest.
An
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 speci c example could be
“No
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the “No
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 man’s sky” videogame which was advertised as the revolutionary game that would change
videogames
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 concept. Unfortunately, that was far from reality. The game had a lot of problems and errors that made
obvious
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 the developer company stressed too much in advertising. In conclusion, I think focusing
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 new features is good for the
companies
 but has a terrible effect
for
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 consumers, who might end up disappointed after buying the
product
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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