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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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As it goes without saying, everything has its own benefits and shortcomings and
internet
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 is not an exception.
Moreover
, it is believed that
students
 are relying more on
internet
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. By having these facts in mind,
internet’s
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 use for educational purposes should be limited. Herein, I will explain why I am in
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 of
this
 statement with apt and sound reasonings.
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 the one hand,
internet
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 has a plethora of benefits for
students
. Mainly and namely, free
access
 to various educational resources. To cite an example, a student may find the keys to
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problem
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 without encountering
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 difficulties.
On the other hand
,
although
 we cannot turn away from the convenience of
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, we cannot afford to underestimate the damaging consequences that ensue relying solely on
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. What tops the chart is health problems. To be explained more,
students
 can have
access
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 via digital devices. And screens of these devices beem blue lights which have damaging consequences on eyes and can cause health problems. Unsuitable contents are something that should not be forgotten.
This
 is mainly due to the fact that
students
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access
 to a wide array of
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which
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 are not good for their age. Take sexual
contents
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 as an instance.
Hence
,
students
 should be restricted when it comes to using
internet
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, especially for educational purposes. In conclusion, it can be conspicuously stood out from the aforementioned reasonings
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although
internet
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 has its own advantages, its negative effects overweight the advantages and
students
access
 to it should be restricted.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
  • digital age
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