Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret, I write you to express my interest in the job

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advertised in the local grocery store. I am available to help you with domestic duties since I will spend the whole of

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summer at home. I am planning to take a year off my studies and travel around the world, so the money will be very welcome. As you can read in my attached CV, I am currently studying for a gardening degree in my local school, where I am trained to do domestic works that surely will fit your needs. I can work on the garden, do a little plumbing, house cleaning and some electrical amendments if needed.

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, I have been taking care of my grandma for 5 years, so I can help with elders in case you need it. I am completely available at the moment, so I do not care if it is full-time or part-time work. I would be very happy to have something to do

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summer and earn a little money in the process. I am available to make an interview at your convenience. And please, do not hesitate to contact me for

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information Yours sincerely, Israel

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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201 words

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