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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #individuals #climate #change #action #governments #businesses #difference
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Some are of the view that individual efforts for reducing global
climate
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change
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 can ensure good results, yet others believe
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 insufficient and nonsense,
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 achievable solely with the
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 and big companies helps. In my perspective,
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 each small step is precious to tackle
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 issue, the authoritarians like
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 and responsible companies can do something in order to make a
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. On the one hand, it is a known fact that human activities affect the
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 in a plethora of ways, so truly changing one's habits about the approaches in the environment can provide to decrease the effects of
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 to some extent. People by trying to be a less harmful impact on nature, the rate of disaster can decrease in the years ahead. Another potential measure about lessening the effects of the human race can be decreasing the overconsumption of natural resources.
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 is an unsurmountable challenge,
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 actions for its serious impacts can be done by the
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 and big businesses hands. To reach a target, there are many urgent needs
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 as legislating some environmental laws and making more environmentally-friendly investments.
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 by making some drastic changes in laws can help to prevent bad decisions to a great extent. As for big businesses, they can fund new investments which are much more convenient and less harmful to our environment.
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, they may publish programmes to raise public awareness of the global issue. In the conclusion of
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, despite the people's steps cutting back on
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,
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 and companies' measures can create some straightforward solutions for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainable modes of transportation
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • renewable energy sources
  • incentives
  • eco-friendly habits
  • mitigation
  • recycling
  • energy-efficient appliances
  • emission standards
  • green technology
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • industrial waste
  • collaborative efforts
  • combating climate change
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