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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, - Say what participants liked about the hotel - explain why they were unhappy about the food - suggest what manager should do to improve the food in future

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 with regard to express my dissatisfaction with your
hotel
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 service ,especially about
food
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.
Although
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this
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 is not a complaint letter, I would like to give feedback concerning your
hotel
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. Our company meeting was held at your
hotel
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last
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 Friday.
Firstly
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, I would like to say your
hotel
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 decoration.
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 is amazing and so beautiful. The meeting room types of equipment and location are very impressive. Staffs are so friendly as well. Everyone loves your
hotel
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 until we had lunch.
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 the
food
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 preparation was nice, the taste of the dishes was very lousy. I don't know how to describe it but
this
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 kind of
food
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 shouldn't serve in
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 type of
hotel
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. Some of the seafood dishes were not fresh. After lunch, everyone gave me negative comments about your
hotel
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food
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. I would like to suggest that you should emphasize the taste of your foods when it is served.
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,
food
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 hygiene and freshness are vital.
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, ensure the foods of validity which intended to use before serving. I hope you would take the necessary action regarding my advice. Kind regards, Yan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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