You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Johnson, We have recently been informed that our bi-weekly rehearsals in the community hall would no longer be possible. I am writing
this
letter to you requesting a reconsideration as we are an aspiring group of musicians with limited funds. We aim at mastering the drum and guitar instruments
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while keeping jazz as our genre of music. Our goal is to be the best in
this
industry over the coming 3 years. While trying to achieve our ambition, we
also
believe that it is important to serve society.
As a result
, 20% of every income we receive is given to a charitable organization, "Educate The Youth", which
then
sponsor the education of the children from tier 3 cities until grade 12. We would really appreciate it if you could reconsider our permit for our group rehearsals. If necessary we are flexible in moving the practice days to Monday evenings and Saturday Mornings as we have noticed that the hall is quieter during those periods. Looking forward to a favourable response. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Yukta Muthreja
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