You have organised on 19th birthday party for your relative and invited elderly gas. It was a successful party. Write a letter to the hotel Manager, to provide the feedback: in your letter, you should tell: - when the party took place - why it was successful - thanks for staff member who was really helpful.

Dear sir I hope you are well and as well as your all
staff
members
are
also
good. A few days ago on 28th February 2022 my grandfather's 90th birthday so we planned to organise a
party
. My big brother suggested your hotel for
this
party
which is located on 150 ring road Rajkot. It was so a beautiful event for all of us and your hotel is decorated by your
staff
.
Moreover
, it was a successful
party
that days because my all family
members
are getting together met on
this
occasion and
also
we invited a friend who is old people the same age as my grandfather. I organised a music
party
with it and
also
welcoming to all people but there was a special famous singer was accidentally came there
then
the
party
was outstanding.
In addition
, all
staff
members
are politely communication with all people and their service was very good and I think without your
staff
member's help we cannot organise a successful
party
.
Finally
, I thank you and most of your all
staff
members
, they give me a good suggestion for a better
party
which was more helpful for us and I would like to especially thank for
this
party
all of the
staff
. Yours Faithfully Vikram
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