You have organised on 19th birthday party for your relative and invited elderly gas. It was a successful party. Write a letter to the hotel Manager, to provide the feedback: in your letter, you should tell: - when the party took place - why it was successful - thanks for staff member who was really helpful.
Dear sir
I hope you are well and as well as your all
staff
members
are also
good. A few days ago on 28th February 2022 my grandfather's 90th birthday so we planned to organise a party
. My big brother suggested your hotel for this
party
which is located on 150 ring road Rajkot. It was so a beautiful event for all of us and your hotel is decorated by your staff
.
Moreover
, it was a successful party
that days because my all family members
are getting together met on this
occasion and also
we invited a friend who is old people the same age as my grandfather. I organised a music party
with it and also
welcoming to all people but there was a special famous singer was accidentally came there then
the party
was outstanding. In addition
, all staff
members
are politely communication with all people and their service was very good and I think without your staff
member's help we cannot organise a successful party
.
Finally
, I thank you and most of your all staff
members
, they give me a good suggestion for a better party
which was more helpful for us and I would like to especially thank for this
party
all of the staff
.
Yours Faithfully
VikramSubmitted by viramgoraniya9 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite