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Some educationalists are say a child should be taught to play a musical instrument.

#educationalists #child #instrument
Nowadays, all of us love music. We have almost a little skill
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 playing a musical instrument. Some people think it is not important to be able to play it.
However
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 educationalists note that children should know how to play almost one musical instrument. I think
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 it
is extremely need
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 to have some skills on music, on art and on different ways. Because
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 young people should be active
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 every direction. They should not only be interested in playing games or be busy on their phones. But they should look around and know
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 interesting and
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exciting
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exiting
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 things. If a child has a little interest
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 doing something, he or she will do it. If children are not interested in anything, in
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 case, parents should help to have that interest. There are a lot of
adventages
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advantages
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 playing a musical instrument.
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, it makes us being relaxed and
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 about good things. In conclusion, I want to note that I agree with
sinetists
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scientists
. Every parent should make a condition for
child
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a child
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 to learn playing different musical instruments and
beying
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being
 interested in many spheres. The world is beautiful with music, so we should love it and can be able to create it by ourselves.
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