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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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business stability became one of the most essential factors in everybody's life but, numerous folks opine that having work pleasure is more vital than other factors. as far as I am convinced both opinions should
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 era, both attitudes are elaborated on in the below. In
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 and adequate source of revenue for everybody is nessecery, not only families but
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 a person who live individually need income to cover the cost of
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, from accommodation to buying food, by having permanent employment could be a remedy for preventing any pressure on
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 if a man does not have a stable income it may lead to facing many heart conditions
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, from health care to mental one, as a ,result it is essential to have a fixed income. Naturally, being pleased with job plays a critical role in human being growth style, these days people are working about 8 hours daily, if employees don't like their job it creates a multitude of psychological consequences in their soul, working on the not loved major leads to many detest situation
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 and create anxiety and depression potential. So having favourable work became essential as I mentioned before. To sum up, both activity security and pleasure need to be combined, and together
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