Completing university is thought to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that graduating from a higher education institution plays a key factor to be hired in an extraordinary company. Others argue that having various

experience

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along with developing soft skills

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more beneficial. Regarding

this

, I strongly agree with the former assertion.

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essay will outline certain reasons

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why they support both aspects and suggest my opinion. On the one hand, it is generally acknowledged that

companies

prefer to employ

candidats

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candidates

who have

adequte

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adequate

experiences which are relative to jobs since the

companies

do not want to waste their budgets for training them.

For example

, a survey conducted by the Korea Labor Foundation has revealed that almost 15% of employers feel frustrated when employees who are trained by

companies

decide to

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the work. As the example clearly illustrates, fully qualified workers who have already have practical experience are welcomed by a significant number of recruiters.

On the other hand

, some say that getting a certification from a university is the very

first

step to

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recruiting competition as the

degree

represents candidates' ability and qualification.

For instance

, recent media in Korea reports that examiners tend to abundant

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resumes which

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not depict a

degree

.

Hence

, it is reasonable to point out that at least

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a bachelor

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degree

is an efficient means of getting in recruitment in

this

competitive society. In my perspective, undoubtedly, graduating college is essential to have well-paid jobs as academic perforation is indispensable to work in high-levelled working industries

such

as

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healthcare

and governments. Even though practical skills and soft skills are important, if a person

do

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not have a

degree

, he cannot be a doctor or a

lowyer

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lawyer

lower

.

Therefore

, university education plays a major factor in getting a highly-paid job. In conclusion, while I accept that

companies

prefer to hire an experienced worker, there is no doubt to point out that getting a

degree

is more important to get in

competition

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and for an acknowledged job.