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A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food (Frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way ?

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The given bar chart illustrates the buying
behavior
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 of 5 major industries from the
e-commerce
 segment in Canada in a span of four years between 2015 to 2019. Overall, manufacturing, construction, and wholesale showed an increase in
e-commerce
purchase
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purchases
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 from 2015 to 2019.
However
, retail and communication showed a slight dip in buying from
e-commerce
 for the same period.
To begin
 with, Information and communication always had the maximum procurement from
e-commerce
 at 60% and above for all the years, while
highest
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 was for the
year
 2018 at over 70% , it saw a dip to just below 70% in the
year
 2019.
Likewise
, retail
also
 had the highest buying in 2018 at 58% and in 2019 dipped to 57%. Though, the increase from 2015 was
significant
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 by approximately 20% from 31-32%. During the same
period
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 construction and wholesale had a similar profile increasing
year
 on
year
. Though wholesale had more
e-commerce
 buying for all the years than construction.
On the other hand
, manufacturing showed
considerable
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 variation
on
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 its purchasing pattern from
e-commerce
. Starting at about 30% in 2015,
then
 increasing by almost 20% to 52% in 2015, again dropping to 45% in 2016 and
finally
 registering procurement of 58% in 2019.
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