You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

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letter regarding a goal I have always had in my career, which is spending six months in our main centre in the US. One of the main reasons why I believe it would be a valuable experience for me and for the company is that I would be able to learn a lot about their processes, and later apply the improvements in our local processes.

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, it would be a great experience for me to practice the language and meet excellent professionals. In order to reduce the impact locally, I could still be responsible for 20% of the most important tasks I have today, and I am sure the rest of the team could help with the other activities.

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, I could send a detailed guide containing each activity, the owners and the deadlines,

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, it would be easier for you to monitor everything.

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, to be able to reach my goal and develop my career, I would like to ask for your help. I am aware you have many contacts in the US office and I would appreciate it if you could write a recommendation letter, as well as talk to them if possible. I still will be available to help you with all doubts and emergencies. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Mariana Borges

mariih_borgesTue Mar 15 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

227 words

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professional development
global operations
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remote work
progress updates
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