We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

These days people are being more dependent on computer-based technologies for all needs, essential or

otherwise

.

This

increasing dependency even for

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task

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has

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impact on the

future

.

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cons will be discussed about

this

reliance. No one can accurately predict what

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holds for us but certain trends can be expected by measuring the present and extrapolating them linearly. Our reliance

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computer

technology

is one

such

that can be examined to predict possible outcomes in the

future

. As we can ascertain, there is exponential growth in all

technology based

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products and their adoption is exploding day by day. We are connecting remote villages that once did not even have electricity,

this

trend will continue into the

future

and result in a world completely reliant on

technology

. While many disagree with the fact that

technology

is a boon to society, I

on the other hand

agree with it. Being reliant on computers is not as bad as

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being portrayed,

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is

cause

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there are more pros than cons. To exemplify, communication between places including countries have been possible. Now, even the most remote people are able to connect with the world,

this

would not have been possible without the reliance on

technology

.

Additionally

,

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of

businesses

and

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of new vectors within

businesses

can

also

be taken as examples. Dependency on

technology

has

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to

growth

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the growth

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of

businesses

and created millions of

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jobs that once were non-existent. In conclusion, It is okay to be reliant on

computer

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computers

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and

its

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technology

. There are more benefits than drawbacks. In the coming

future

, every person in

this

world will use and be reliant on some

technology

related to computers. It is in fact a good thing for us and the society as

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apparatus between people and nations will dramatically improve and new jobs will be created in

businesses

that are formed due to new

technology

.