Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays, the level of

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health

of

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is declining at an alarming rate. Some concerned

people

claim that employers, being responsible for their workers' wellbeing have to allow them to spend from 1 to 2 hours exercising.

Although

it may lead to some economical problems for

companies

, I wholeheartedly believe that extra

time

for physical activity benefits not only employees' mental and physical wellbeing but

companies

themselves.

First

of all,

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time

allowed to exercise will benefit those who are having a constant heavy workload.

In other words

, being driven by a desire to earn more,

people

take more and more projects and overlook their

health

in favour of work, which

then

results in the appearance of various illnesses and more пропускм.

Companies

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are worried about the

health

of employees with extra

time

to at least avoid

such

dire consequences through physical

activness

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activeness

.

In addition

,

companies

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implement

this

approach benefit as well. Exercises, even moderate ones, stimulate brain activity, increasing efficiency at the workplace. Obviously, the higher productivity and dedication of employees, the higher the revenue of a company that hired them.

Therefore

, it would be

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forward-looking policy for

companies

to allocate a couple of hours on the improvement of

health

,

however

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expenditures required.

Nevertheless

, some not interested occupants may take

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advantage by wasting the

time

given on online games or television, and if the number of

people

with

such

careless attitude increases, it would mean that all the resources spent on

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of

this

system will be gone in vain. In conclusion, I suppose that company owners should express

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concern about the

health

of

people

working on them, as the chance to make a company flourish is hidden in

health

to some extent.